MrBallistic's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Microcosm]

Overlong, but good

The idea was a little cliched, aping the Matrix is old hat now, but the comic book style saved it from mediocrity. Its obvious you dont have the most artistic talent in the world but you placed a ton of effort into this submission and it shows. Keep up the good work.

[A Letter from God]

Not Anti-God but Anti-Man

God is British and remixs Radiohead songs, who knew?

Good job by the way, I found it to be an apropriate example of finger pointing and blame exchanging, only problems were the music could occasionaly overpower the words and their was a lot of white space. But jolly good job anyway.

Lankie responds:

Haha! Thank you! Yeah some parts are a bit empty...blame my lack of imagination on that! ^ ^

[Tarboy]

Superb

I cant even remember the last time I stopped to watch an entire flash on this website. This has reminded me why I fell in love with animation in the first place. Bravo, well done.

[Pico 09]

Uh...

Hilarious, like always, but just a little too over the line...

[There She Is!! step4]

Good, but not as good.

Out of all of your high quality cartoons this defiantly felt like the weakest. The whimsical humor of past installments has been replaced with dramatic events. Its nice to know your cartoons have something to say now, but it all felt very mellow dramatic and out of place with the past installments. As usual, the animation and art was top of the line work and still gives it a magic that most cartoons lack on this website. Still, the drama should exist among the humor, instead of an awkward strait up drama.

[<3 animation]

Your Ex-Girlfrind Will Love it...

So show it to her, not us. It just drags on and on. The art is pretty good but it could of used some color. Crap song and really just a bunch of blurred images. Try something different last time.

javarush214 responds:

i will do so... ill show it to her on her birthday... thanks on your comment

[Misguided Sniper]

Pleasently Surprised

With the poor art and backgrounds I was ready to blam, and usually I do. These submissions tend to have no effort what so ever put into them, thank god this one did. Next time dont rely on .jpg's for your backgrounds and never use stick figures. Ever, defiantly work on your art as well. But really, this was pretty funny and the voice work was pretty decent, nice job.

GenArmegeddon responds:

Glad You Liked it.... yeah i know i was a little lazy with the background. And i still kind of need to know how to draw with the mouse. Thanks for the Review.

[Blazing Renegade]

Not Enought

The story for this was clearly made up in an hour, its a bunch of anime stereotypes (A guy named blade?) and stick figure stereotypes. The animation was decent but i just couldnt stay interested in something so bland and forgettable.

[Citation Needed episode18]

Blah

I get the idea in having an eliet beat agents cameo in other games, but the jokes were so lame. I didn't even smile, "I just have to outrun you" ha ha, straight from boys life. You have drawing talent (I don't like furries though), but your animation still needs a little work. Just, try to do something original next time, not the overdone to death resident evil parody.

ThatManOverThere responds:

I don't animate and I'm better at comic humour and storytelling than the humour found in flash animations. This is part of a series, so it's meant to be read as part of a group of comics not just on its own.

I couldn't make it anything else other than where they are at in the storyline right now, which explains why it's a parody of the Resident Evil 1 intro as currently the main characters are, in fact, trapped inside an Xbox.

And on top of that, it's my first try. Which to be honest you have to be grateful that at least I didn't just stuck up a picture with a few words with some music in the background. Or a sprite animation.

If anyone who is good at animating and action scripting thinks they can use my drawing talent, and I agree to it, then that's pretty much the direction I'll head. And in the mean time I'll just continue to slowly make the odd cartoon every now and again and slowly improve over time.

Now that you know my reasoning... yeah you're pretty much right in some ways. Parodying Resient Evil isn't orrigonal, but unfortunatly more people will view this in the long run because they'll want to see Resident Evil. As a lot of the pictures I have done that are on other things other than my comic get a lot more views.

So, just for you, I'll make the next animation I do about something other than an existing game or film. Just to see what it'll be like. And get a few more people to work on some more orrigonal jokes. This was more or less a test to see if I could do it afterall.

And... I've just rambled on for no reason.

[Jeff episode 1]

Close to greatness

I have to say, i went in to this expecting crap, but this was pretty decent. You put a lot of effort into this and it shows. The only thing limiting you is your artistic ability, keep working on that and your sure to improve. Also, think of some better story elements than, "Bounty hunter kills crap". But keep at it, you show a lot of promise.